The line graph provides information about the past and anticipated finances for a local authority in New Zealand from 2012 t0 2022.overall, the trends for Rate revenue and user charges are expected to climb up over the period of time, whereas grants and subsidies and Borrowings is having many fluctuations.
As is observed from the graph Rates Revenue started with 1400 in 2012 ,till 2013 the value remained steady and by 2022 the trend inclines to 2400. The user chargers trend in 2012 commenced with 1000, dramatically improved to 1300 by 2013 and quickly doubles by 2022.Borrowing trend increased gradually from 800 to 1200 in 3 years from 2012, fallen down to 600 in 2016, having an improvement it reaches to the same point,where it started , by 2022.The Grants and subsidies increased gradually till 2016, reached the highest point 800 of the trend and seamlessly falls down to 500 by 2022 .
- The bar graph below shows the numbers of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia in the year 2003 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 64
- The bar graph compares the amount of coffee and meat consumed each year by Norway, France, Germany, USA, Russia, China and Japan. 56
- The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make a comparision where releva 56
- The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98013245033 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74887695079 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 22.4926829268 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.812241676 43.030603864 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.666666667 112.824112599 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.3333333333 22.9334400587 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150945284641 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12703715646 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154018264316 0.0843802449381 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178701301337 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165081745778 0.0819641961636 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 13.2329268293 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.11 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.9970731707 200% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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