The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050

Essay topics:

The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050.

The line chart illustrates how the population in New Zealand changed from 1950 with predictions to 2050.
In general, there is a gradual decrease in the percentage of people from 25-37 while the opposite is true for other groups over a 100-year period. In addition, over 65 people accounted for the highest percentage of population throughout the period, including future figures.
In 1950, the proportion of those who are above 65 made up 60% of total New Zealand population, which was by far higher than that of 38-45 people and 25-37 people, at about 25% and nearly 21% respectively. Meanwhile, the figure for people under 14 was the lowest, at 5%
From 1990 afterward, New Zealand witnessed a gradual growth to 70% in the percentage of people who are older than 65 and a similar change was seen in the proportion of people aged from 38 to 45, which grew dramatically to 48%. Both figures are projected to decline to 65% and 40% respectively in the last year of the period. A considerable decrease was seen in the percentage of people aged from 25 to 37 and this number is likely to continue to fall to 0% in 2050. By contrast, the proportion of people who are younger than 14 gradually went up and it is expected to reach 205 in 2050

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the period, including future figures. In 1950, the proportion of those who are a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, in addition, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5990990991 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70186548594 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536036036036 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4462571215 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.625 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260991568074 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129124436493 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127752703064 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201156896243 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14640824839 0.0819641961636 179% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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