Given are the two maps delineating the predicted differences between road system now and in future.
Perceptibly, the region it supposed to experience changes modifications with the presence of many road to reduce traffic accidents.
At present, the Forest Road running from south west to north east crosses the City Road running from west to east, where accidents often happen because of no traffic light and have bend at the cross with Forsest Road. When it come to the north east on the City Road have a Supermarket located on a lane and in the future, at the cross will the existence of a roundabout in the center of the map and the presence of a lane go straight to supermarket.
Moving to the north west have school located on a Low Lane crosses with City Road and in the future have traffic lights reduce accident, this road is widened at the junction cross with Forest Road. House on the both side of road keep intact untill now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the two maps delineating the predicted ...
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Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...differences between road system now and in future. Perceptibly, the region it supposed ...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'bent'.
Suggestion: bent
...en because of no traffic light and have bend at the cross with Forsest Road. When it...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
...at the cross with Forsest Road. When it come to the north east on the City Road have...
^^^^
Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce accident, this road is widened at the junction cross with Forest Road. House o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60119047619 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45831892075 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0410127022 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.833333333 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173604390801 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972646388459 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249322378075 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116699972725 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177469495685 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.