Given is the line graph delineating the rate of people reaching news in 4 different kinds of media, namely TV, Internet, Radio, and Newspaper, during a period of 25 years, commencing from 1995 and giving projections for the year 2025.
perceptibly, the percentage of people getting news from the internet started at a very low level, yet it is expected to leap in rate to 2025, while the opposite is likely to be true for TV, Radio and Newspaper.
the Internet just became a more popular source approached by information-takers after the year 1995 when the proportion reached up to 40% with in 20 years. Conversely, the similar pattern in the rate of those using Newspaper and Radio to get information was shared with 68% and 52% in 1995; however, the numbers plunged over the years, in 2000 both hit the same level of 50% before recording at 32% for Radio and 29% for newspaper in2020. Likewise, the percentage of TV users for news went down to 55% in 2020 from 70% in the beginning year, despite a slight upswing to 60% in 2010.
In the future 2025, the rate of those using the internet continuously swell to 58%. Second in terms of the popularity of these sources was TV with 50%, followed by that of Newspaper and Radio with 29% and 22% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent kinds of media, namely TV, Internet, Radio, and Newspaper, during a period of...
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Suggestion: Perceptibly
... giving projections for the year 2025. perceptibly, the percentage of people getting news ...
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Suggestion: The
... be true for TV, Radio and Newspaper. the Internet just became a more popular sou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, likewise, second, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61607142857 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69276003993 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584821428571 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6418390535 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.714285714 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174023171488 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807151122643 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735734134538 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116098759 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635374872195 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.