The line graph shows the percentage of people of different age groups and how they rate a set of factors in terms of importance when buying a new home.
The line graph illustrates the important, measured in percentages, that four ages groups place on five different factors when they move on new home.
Overall, it is clearly that a low crime rate is the most important factor, whereas public transport systems appreared to less important across all the age groups.
Of all the factors, the desire for a low crime rate is by far the most important. Amongst the all the age group this figure stands at around 80%, with the middle aged and elderly viewing it as slightly more important. Whereas, parks and public transport are factors that people less consider to move on new home.
Meanwhile, schools are the second factor that affect to home decision of all age groups, except group 55 to 64, with the highest proportion account for about three-fifths in group 25 to 34. Besides, shopping facilities are higher chosen at about 30% by group 55 to 64 compared to younger groups.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider moving'.
Suggestion: consider moving
... transport are factors that people less consider to move on new home. Meanwhile, schools are ...
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Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'compared' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'compares'.
Suggestion: compares
...r chosen at about 30% by group 55 to 64 compared to younger groups.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89308176101 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49294721314 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62893081761 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2012515287 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.142857143 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305897585282 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137918802893 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107089944698 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197393317337 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103640677061 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.