The given graph indicates the number of books for children, adult, and educational was sold over five- year period.
Overview, The sales of children and educational's book enjoy an upward trend whereas adult's fiction suffer from a drop.In addition, children book steadily become the most popular category among those three.
Initially, In 2002, books for children and education surged at just under 25 million dollars and approximately 33 million dollars. However, from 2003 to 2005, while educational book gradually dipped, children book continued a slight rising to over 45 million dollars. Henceforth, both types of book shared the same growth trend up to more than 55 million dollars in children book and 32 in educational book.
On the other hand, adult book began with the highest number which is 45 million dollars. yet it reduce sharply to 35 million dollar in 2003. Then, a moderate growth in 2004 presented before a swiftly fall to 2006 by the loose of 10 million dollars.
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...ereas adults fiction suffer from a drop.In addition, children book steadily become...
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...radually dipped, children book continued a slight rising to over 45 million dolla...
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...pes of book shared the same growth trend up to more than 55 million dollars in ch...
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...est number which is 45 million dollars. yet it reduce sharply to 35 million dollar ...
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...ber which is 45 million dollars. yet it reduce sharply to 35 million dollar in 2003. T...
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...oderate growth in 2004 presented before a swiftly fall to 2006 by the loose of 10 million doll...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, then, whereas, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08024691358 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52481209527 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66049382716 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.790960446 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224841917697 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102821717859 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697138895705 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147294974525 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639850642712 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.