The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the number of visitors in million traveled to and off the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar diagram depicted the most popular countries which are visited by UK citizens in the year 1999.
Overall, the UK residents visits were significantly increased in 1999 from 1979 and travelers from abroad have a steadily increased number. To UK inhabitants France were the most popular countries among others in 1999.
To begin in line graph visits made by the citizens of the UK rose fivefold in 1999. Whereas, travelers from other countries made visits in the UK had risen 10 to 30 million from 1979 to 1999 respectively.
UK citizens visit most of France in 1999 and about 11 million people. In contrast, Spain had about 9 million visitors. The USA, Turkey, Greece had less than 5 million visitors in 1999.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...h illustrates the number of visitors in million traveled to and off the UK from 1979 to...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tizens of the UK rose fivefold in 1999. Whereas, travelers from other countries made vi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 688.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81118881119 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56709086303 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496503496503 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 197.1 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3333333333 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4444444444 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449484466161 0.215688989381 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21313527672 0.103423049105 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104463576262 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316837849469 0.15604864568 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11181508421 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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