The graph shows the UK visitors state from and out the UK between 1979 till 1999 showed by milions, while the bar chart shows the top countries chosed by the UK residants to be visited.
overall, there was steady increase of the UK residants visiting abroad from 1984 when reaching 1999 the most popular country whuch was france, while there was steady but less increase of the overseas residants visiting the UK.
from 1979 up to 1984 the UK residants visitng abroad reached 20 milions but after that there was huge increase reaching 30 milions around 1989 and 40 milions around 1994, the higher rate was at 1999 which reached 50 milions. The top countries visited by the UK residants were Turkey, Greese, USA which they all recieved less then 5 milions, and Spain less then 10 milion , and the most popular country was France which recieved more than 10 milions.
On the other hand the oversease visitors reach there peak at 1999 reaching 20 milionsin comperison to 1984which was just above 10 milions.
To sum up there was sudden increase of the UK residants visiting abroad whom they choose in 1999 France to visit it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, while, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74489795918 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23135568257 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.547539520022 93% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1427608259 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.0 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404053632635 0.215688989381 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222143118965 0.103423049105 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15052073155 0.0843802449381 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25227780959 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150328371927 0.0819641961636 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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