The lne grph below shows the number of cel phone subscribers in a particular cityby genderSummarize the infrmation b selectg and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant

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The lne grph below shows the number of cel phone subscribers in a particular city
by gender
Summarize the infrmation b selectg and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant

<p style="white-space: normal;">A glance at the graph provided reveals some striking similarities between man and woman in using mobile phone for the period of 20 years in Marysville.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">It is evidence from the graph that there was a common trend in the amount of described in terms of gender. Both of two groups witnessed the dramatically rising from 1995 to 2015.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">In 1995, the number of cell phone's users experiences a rocket increasing from 500 people and reached the peak at the year of 2005. Despite the same rising, man-users are slightly less than women but until 2005, both two lines met at the same point in 2500 users.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">After developing with the same speed, from 2005, the quantity of male describes was stable in 2500 until 5 years later while that of female was decreased at 2300 users at the same time.&nbsp;<span style="font-size: 1.1em;">By 2015, the amount of men users had been risen and reached nearly 2700 describer. However, only 2200 women used cell phone in Marysville at that time</span></p>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1077, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'describer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'describers'.
Suggestion: describers
... had been risen and reached nearly 2700 describer. However, only 2200 women used cell pho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71264367816 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.53622695648 2.65546596893 171% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.516610379 43.030603864 350% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 248.5 112.824112599 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.5 22.9334400587 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0233632073518 0.215688989381 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227360357083 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0162196601735 0.0843802449381 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0233632073518 0.15604864568 15% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 13.2329268293 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 61.2550243902 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.3012195122 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.73 11.4140731707 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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