The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the maps provided reveals some changes in an island after the investment in tourism.
It is noticeable that before the innovation, there were only a few trees in the north-east and south-west corner, but after constructing, there was a huge change in the number of accommodation in the island.
There were more and more houses were built in the middle of the island and foot paths were created around the residential areas for transportation purpose. Additionally, the receptionist and the restaurant were built and divided the residential into two separate areas.
According to the construction of some tourist facilities, the transportation system had been developed with the appearance of a pier in the south and two more boats. The swimming area in the west of the island was also accessed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 681.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12030075188 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07760443323 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9478883789 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17317868762 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852952803723 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617038827702 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111942970122 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060124704913 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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