London Underground Station Passengers

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London Underground Station Passengers

The provided line graph indicates the number of commuters going by London Underground from 6.00 to 22.00.

It is clear that two rush hours of 8.00 and 18.00 have the the highest number of passengers in Underground Station. Additionally, London Underground Station passengers are in the equal quantity at 6.00 and 16.00.

At the first hour of a working day, 6 o’clock, there are only 100 passengers at London Underground Station which is the lowest point shown in this graph. Two following hours, due to the highly increasing demand of workers or students, the quantity of commuters at Underground Station rise significantly to 200 at 7.00 and peaks at 400 at 8.00 before suddenly declining to around 180 at 10.00. In contrast, from 11.00 to 14.00, the figure experiences the gradually increasing trend to reach the impressive number of 300 passengers at 14.00.

In the rest hours of a day, the number of commuters in London Underground Station continue to fluctuate dramatically. Specifically, there is a fast decrease in the figure to the bottom at 16.00 before going up suddenly again to the second highest point in this chart, approximately 375 people at 18.00. On the contrary, the later it is, the less passengers are in Underground Station with a strongly falling trend.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...t two rush hours of 8.00 and 18.00 have the the highest number of passengers in Undergr...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...t two rush hours of 8.00 and 18.00 have the the highest number of passengers in Undergr...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 342, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun passengers is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
.... On the contrary, the later it is, the less passengers are in Underground Station w...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, in contrast, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07042253521 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96061415495 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525821596244 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.518691883 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335012588618 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212531572732 0.103423049105 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138013695922 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268643495138 0.15604864568 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101714459303 0.0819641961636 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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