The bar chart depicts why people take up studies for age demographics. The bottom chart gives insight into the support provided by the employer for the students of different ages.
Two reasons namely – career growth and interest are used to compare people of various age groups which are under 26, 26-29, 30-39, 40-49 and 49 and over.
According to the bar chart, most of the students who chose to study for growth in their career are under 26 years of age which is followed by 70 students being in the age group 26-29 years. The least students who opt for the same cause are 49 and above. The pattern, however, reverses when one looks at the reason as an interest to decide to study which shows the least number (10) of students under 26 years and the highest (70) being when someone crosses the age of 49 years. The trends indicate as age increases someone is most likely to take up studies due to their interests rather than career growth.
The same age groups are used to present the time off and scholarship provided by employers. Most of the students who are able to secure the bursaries and free time are under 26 years. The age group followed by the under 26 is 26 -29 which has about 50 students. The number dips in the middle age group of 30-39 years only to increase for the subsequent age groups.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: LEAST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'least numb'?
Suggestion: least numb
...rest to decide to study which shows the least number 10 of students under 26 years and the h...
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Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...en someone crosses the age of 49 years. The trends indicate as age increases someon...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nterests rather than career growth. The same age groups are used to present the...
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Line 7, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...increase for the subsequent age groups.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49166666667 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16692306175 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479166666667 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.178387528 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260933833759 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115065207012 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460660741762 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16850997496 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513197083909 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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