The table has details regarding the amount needed to be spent on the weekly rents per property as well as the salaries needed to afford the properties in three areas of London. The properties are divided into three categories based on the number of bedrooms available – one, two and three. The weekly rate depends on the number of bedrooms to be rented with 3 bedroom property being most expensive and 1 bedroom, the least. This trend is consistent among all three areas in London.
Between the properties located in the areas, Notting Hill, Regent’s Park, and Fulham, Noting Hill is the most expensive followed by Regent’s Park and Fulham. The residents need to shell out 375, 485 and 738 Pounds for one, two and three bedroom respectively for a property in Notting Hill. The salary needed to keep up with the expenses is also in the agreement with the rent trends hence, the highest salary requirement is also highest for the same area i.e. 98,500-194,000 Pounds per year.
If one needs a affordable property, the Fulham area is most appropriate as the properties are available for 215, 390 and 600 Pounds per week which is suitable for the professionals earning 56,500 to 157,500 Pounds per year. The properties in Regent’s Park are likely to be occupied by the middle income group of 85,500-118,000 Pounds per year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ooms available – one, two and three. The weekly rate depends on the number of bed...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...4,000 Pounds per year. If one needs a affordable property, the Fulham area is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93392070485 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73482077971 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533039647577 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2278428028 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.444444444 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0990491189285 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526183955393 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386207712321 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710689717811 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309687740932 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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