Male and female worked in 6 different sectors

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Male and female worked in 6 different sectors

• The graphs depict how many people (male and female) worked in six variety of sectors in Freedonia Between 1975 and 1995.
The main facts that stand out are that male workers were relatively superior over the female workers during the period shown. In addition, while male workers remained stable almost in all sectors throughout the period, female workers witnessed a relatively ascending trend.
From the graph, it is clear that male worked in 3 sectors (Public Sector ND, Wholesale RT, Manufacturing) remain steady during the period. Subsequently, Finance/Banking increase slightly, from 415 to 445 severally. Whereas, Public Sector N falls to approximately 30 for 2 decades.
The figure for female worked in Manufacturing and Public Sector ND still unchanged over the period. Meanwhile, Wholesale RT, Communications, Finance/Banking, and Public Sector D soared. While the two formers rose from 540 to 790 and had nearly a two-fold growth successively, the two letters provided an increase of roughly 305 and reached a high of 105 respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, whereas, while, in addition, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37575757576 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05735801249 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3176065629 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5555555556 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348079075156 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148798196777 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11168152612 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222019594179 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633495396156 0.0819641961636 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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