Manufacturing and use of cement.

Essay topics:

Manufacturing and use of cement.

If we look at the details of cement production, initially, limestone and
clay are crushed together to form a powder. Next, the powder is mixed
by a mixer, after which it is passed through a rotating heater. After being
heated, it is then ground by a grinder, before being packed into bags as
cement.
Focusing on the manufacture of concrete, this is made up of four
components. Half of concrete is composed of gravel, a quarter consists
of sand, and water constitutes a tenth. The remainder is formed of the
earlier produced cement. This formula is combined together using a
horizontally-rotating concrete mixer to create concrete.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ent production, initially, limestone and clay are crushed together to form a powd...
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...form a powder. Next, the powder is mixed by a mixer, after which it is passed thr...
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...d through a rotating heater. After being heated, it is then ground by a grinder, ...
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...rinder, before being packed into bags as cement. Focusing on the manufacture of...
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...ure of concrete, this is made up of four components. Half of concrete is composed...
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... a tenth. The remainder is formed of the earlier produced cement. This formula is...
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...his formula is combined together using a horizontally-rotating concrete mixer to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 543.0 965.302439024 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 106.0 196.424390244 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12264150943 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2086804361 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12440809631 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698113207547 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 166.5 283.868780488 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.8222516271 43.030603864 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5714285714 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 3.83414634146 235% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217025723532 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776358141557 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529217668632 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568446985215 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899986203667 0.0819641961636 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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