There are two many variables processes .
The process begins when the heat of the sun causes the water in the sea to
evaporate, which in turn creates rainclouds. The rain from these clouds fills a reservoir
near the ocean. A dam with a valve controls the flow of water from this reservoir, and
having powered a turbine the water is returned to the reservoir by way of a pump.
When the water is released by the dam, the turbine placed downstream spins and
this creates energy. This energy is carried by high voltages cables, strung between
pylons, to a transformer station. At this point, the hydro-electric energy is transmitted
via underground cables to power plants, homes and schools.
Processes and Maps
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Focusing on the northern part of the town, since 1995 more houses have been built
either side of the road leading to the north-west, and a new road has been laid heading
westward. In the north-east, the farmland and forest park have been converted into a
golf course and tennis courts respectively.
As for the south, the shops have been transformed into restaurants, across from which
the fish market has been turned into a set of apartments. Down the road to the west, a
car park has been added to the home, while the cafe remains unchanged. Finally, a
fishing port now extends into the sea off the coast.
- The chart below illustrates the result of a survey on the types of houses people liked, taken in 2005. 78
- The chart below shows the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012. 78
- There are two many variables processes . 11
- Islip town centre now and development 70
- The Brick Manufacturing Process 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...f the sun causes the water in the sea to evaporate, which in turn creates rainclo...
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...rain from these clouds fills a reservoir near the ocean. A dam with a valve contr...
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...e flow of water from this reservoir, and having powered a turbine the water is re...
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... the turbine placed downstream spins and this creates energy. This energy is carr...
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... by high voltages cables, strung between pylons, to a transformer station. At thi...
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...the hydro-electric energy is transmitted via underground cables to power plants, ...
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..., since 1995 more houses have been built either side of the road leading to the n...
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...st, and a new road has been laid heading westward. In the north-east, the farmlan...
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...d forest park have been converted into a golf course and tennis courts respective...
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...rmed into restaurants, across from which the fish market has been turned into a s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82666666667 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56991136899 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591111111111 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1734857202 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7272727273 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 16.0 3.83414634146 417% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0323703394396 0.215688989381 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.011474659058 0.103423049105 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249971159786 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00616747612374 0.15604864568 4% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238865323154 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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