The chart below illustrates the result of a survey on the types of houses people liked, taken in 2005.

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The chart below illustrates the result of a survey on the types of houses people liked, taken in 2005.

The bar graph demonstrate the various type of house result was liked by the individuals which who survey find by the British over the time period of 2005.
Overall, what stand out from the graph is that while popularity of the Cambridge flats grow over the period in question, and that of detached houses remained high through out, the number of people depended on semi detached houses and is rapidly changed. Terraced houses, mean while, saw an increase followed by drop.
With regard to terraced houses and semi detached houses, the starting figures of London roughly identical at 16 and 18 percent people's respectively. However, where as the flats climbed in London and reached 58 percent. Before levelling off for the remainder of period, the Cambridge in detached house slipped to half this figure.
Turning to the higher buildings, flats stayed consistently popular, with houses figure remaining between 58 and 8 percent throughout the period. Oxford terraced houses popularity was nearly as high as semi detached in Cambridge. With the number of houses rising 15 to 18 percent .

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... percent peoples respectively. However, where as the flats climbed in London and reached...
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...number of houses rising 15 to 18 percent .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11235955056 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54407789272 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.996296182 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.111111111 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157340696895 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635455630676 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598617794738 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108059780845 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606738339894 0.0819641961636 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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