Many people nowadays work long hours and working has become more stressful.
What are the reasons for this?
What could companies do to help employees to improve their lives?
It is true that work hours is getting longer, and stress at work is becoming more intense. In my opinion, the reasons of this problem are related to the pressure of employers for results, and to the workers’ need for more funds. To helping employees corporations should create a better work environment and offer a performance bonus.
People are working more on a stressful environment for a number of reasons. One of them is
that employers are demanding better and faster results from workers. To deliverer the results expected by the companies, people are spending more hours working, and so becoming more stressed. For example, traditional freight companies in South Africa used to deliver an express order in 48 hours, however customers started to demand faster deliveries. So, to solve this problem some companies started to demand employees to work overnight shifts to have the job done in less than 48 hours. Another reasons is that employees is that employee need to make more money. The increasing cost of living in the cities are forcing people to work more to maintain their standard of living. In cities such as Toronto, New York, Tokyo and London it is becoming almost impossible for regular workers to afford a rental apartment. Those are the main causes for the problems presented.
There are two action that corporation should take to help workers to have an improved life. First, companies should provide their employee with a relaxed work environment. It means, bosses should not be monitoring and checking on employees every single minute, moreover companies should have a relaxation room with activities such as massage therapy, games, and tv, so people would be able to alleviate their stress during brakes. Secondly, companies should provide employee with a performance bonus. In other works, the company should offer more money to employees capable to reach their target within their regular work hours. This way people would not need to work more hours to obtain the money they need to afford their high cost of living. These actions would make all the difference for workers' life.
In conclusion, intensive work hours and stressful work environment are result of the large demand from companies that are trying to satisfy the market, and the need for more money on the worker's side. Although companies can not solve these problems completely, they can work on solutions to improve quality of life of their employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 1.00243902439 1696% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 965.302439024 213% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 403.0 196.424390244 205% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10421836228 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 3.73543355544 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56929887833 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 106.607317073 181% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478908188586 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 283.868780488 217% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 8.94146341463 235% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6401381866 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9523809524 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1904761905 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378435431748 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12427040036 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677019920135 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238237837223 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349490828069 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 40.7170731707 228% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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