The map below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now , and plans for its development.
The map gives the detailed description about the current outline of Islip town center and the plan for the expected development. Overall, the changes in the transportation will be expected to bring a lot of development in Islip town. It will be converted to a moderate town.
It is clear from the map that, at present, there are 8 small shopes in either sides of the main road. Although link roads is going towards the school and to the park, housing is not directly connected with roads. Northern most side is countryside.
The future plan of Islip will propose a circle shape to the town, where a dual carriageway will give this shape. The main road will be used only by pedestrians and the shops on the south side will remain the same. In contrast, the shops towards the north will encroach the land in the countryside and form a shopping center along with a bus station on west and car park on the east. Despite the 2 housing, a new housing area will be allocated in north east and in the south. Hence park will cut its size. School will remain in the same place.
- Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. While others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
- First impressions are important Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job To what extent do you agree 53
- The pie charts below show the popularity of different political parties in a countrt before and after the election The election was won by the Conservative party and they formed government with the Liberal Democrats party 77
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- The map below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now , and plans for its development. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 476, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...located in north east and in the south. Hence park will cut its size. School will rem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47959183673 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4225401011 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576530612245 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7728646638 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1666666667 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174969565151 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066715285814 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950252064154 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131295129117 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102834679167 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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