Given are the three maps delineating the modifications of Laguna Beach during a phase of 40 years, commencing from 1950.
Perceptibly, the region experienced drastic transformations to become a well-facilitated tourist destination.
In 1950, in the west of the beach, there were sand dunes, meanwhile, it had woodland in the east of this region. In the middle of the beach, beach huts with a track to their right-hand side were reported. At this period, everything was fairly primitive.
In 1970, the west of the beach stayed unchanged over the years; by contrast, the trees were cut down to make way for the new caravan park. Besides, the track was expanded to turn into the road. What was even more outstanding was the presence of the villas in the old location of beach huts.
In 1990, the region initiated to experience remarkable changes. Myriad coconut trees were mounted to create the newly-added landscaped garden in the west of the area. In addition, the caravan park was replaced by the existence of the car park, and the road seemed to be widened. In the centre of the beach, there was a transformation of the villas into the hotel along with the construction of a swimming pool in its right-hand side. Moreover, the emergence of the surf school was by far the most prominent in this year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the three maps delineating the modifica...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82589285714 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85914759467 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8358427867 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1538461538 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116335580607 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408010082001 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450979565466 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703675723588 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592464808486 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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