The map below show the changes that took place in the town at the seaside resort of Laguna beach between 1950 and 1990.
The modernisation of the town at seaside resort of Laguna beach within four decades (from 1950 to 1990) is illustrates through three various maps.
A quick glance at three maps is quite enough to make it clear that the spectacular developments were seen in town in the period of 40 years. However, whole area remained between sea.
In the map of 1950, sand dunes were in the northwest part of town just behind the beach huts that were connected with the track going towards northeast side. The right side of the track was filled by trees to make woodland. Beach was in front of the beach huts.
In comparison, with 1950, after twenty years, in 1970, beach huts and track were converted into villas and road respectively. Woodland was removed to find space for caravan park.
In comparison, with 1970, after two decades, in 1990, villas was demolished for the construction of hotel. caravan park was expanded in the east direction. Landscaped gardens, pool and surf school were newly added amenities in this year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Caravan
...molished for the construction of hotel. caravan park was expanded in the east direction...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85632183908 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46950619093 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626436781609 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1769375232 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8181818182 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228634225852 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761729440129 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915010361483 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131757566923 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104696865552 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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