The map below show Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and today.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps describe the changes of Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and today.During this period, it is clear that the centre witnessed dramatic changes in size and facilities.
Inside the building, the concert hall/cinema which was in the same place was established in the center of the Colwick Arts Centre. However, it was relocated to the right of the centre and in addition, it increased in size. Two galleries were located next to each other but there is only one now on the left of the centre. The meeting room was moved to the top left corner and split into two smaller rooms standing next to the drama studio which did not appear in the past. The toilet was moved to the bottom right, opposite the concert hall. The snack bar was converted into a cafe, in front of outdoor exhibition and performance area.
Out of the centre of Colwick Arts, there was a wasteland outside the centre but many trees were planted there and the outdoor exhibition and performance area were built. There is a stage in this area and tables were added outside. Inside the central exhibition area was constructed in the middle of the building between the gallery and the concert hall.
In short, clearly, the Colwick Arts Centre changed significantly and expanded
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, in addition, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78703703704 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44800176063 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50462962963 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2516570157 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123210993061 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502981677022 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699440664435 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112186481135 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747441963903 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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