The given maps illustrate stokeford village from 1930 and 2010.Overall, most of the spaces used for other purposes were converted for construction of more houses.
To begin with,stokeford in 1930,moving towards the west it has two shops and one post office and to the east,it contain medium sized primary school.Coming to south East it has a garden with trees and a large house, then both the Northern and the Southern part contained farmlands used for rearing animals.
With civilization and increase in population stokeford village is now well structured and organised , the western axis has only post office now while the eastern now has a huge primary school. Both the Northern and the Southern now has more houses unlike 1930.Towards the south east the is now retirement house for the aged .
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Overall
...te stokeford village from 1930 and 2010.Overall, most of the spaces used for other purp...
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Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , stokeford
...struction of more houses. To begin with,stokeford in 1930,moving towards the west it has ...
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Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...hops and one post office and to the east,it contain medium sized primary school.Co...
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Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'contains'?
Suggestion: contains
... and one post office and to the east,it contain medium sized primary school.Coming to ...
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Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and to the east,it contain medium sized primary school.Coming to south East it h...
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Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Coming
...it contain medium sized primary school.Coming to south East it has a garden with tree...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...age is now well structured and organised , the western axis has only post office n...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'posted'.
Suggestion: posted
...d organised , the western axis has only post office now while the eastern now has a ...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Towards
...outhern now has more houses unlike 1930.Towards the south east the is now retirement ho...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the is now retirement house for the aged .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, well, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 666.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08396946565 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82168340256 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625954198473 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.8634952003 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.5 112.824112599 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.75 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.081003195176 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527284234574 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504951981599 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642448082559 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490744292826 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.2329268293 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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