The chart below show information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
The given bar graph illustrates average house prices in five cities of a country which are New York, Madrid,Tokyo,Frankfurt and London from 1990to 2002 and it's also compare its percentage change from 1989 prices. The unit of measurement is in percentage.
Overall, there was a relatively extreme lower house prices over the earlier years while new York and Madrid experienced an increase changes in average house prices but London has the highest one at the ended of the years even though, there were periods of fluctuations.
Looking at the average house price in 1990 to 1995, change in percentage experienced in New York was at -5% while that of Madrid and Frankfurt havse positive change of 2 and 3 percentage respectively. Both Tokyo and London have extreme price of - 7.5 each.
Between 1996 and 2002, there is relatively new changes observed now. New York that had a negative house price of -5% in previous years now has a positive 5% price changes that of Madrid increased slightly to 4.5%. Tokyo still have a negative percentage in its price change,although, it was - 7.5% before it's now -5%. A little drop was seen in average house price for Frankfurt to 1% while that of London soared from negative price of-7.5% to 12% at the end of 2002, and it's the city that has the greatest price change among the five cities. It's followes by new York and Madrid of 5% and 4% respectively. While Tokyo has the lowest negative price change of -5%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76494023904 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76965972883 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466135458167 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.0642588329 43.030603864 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.727272727 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347017278436 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1449814714 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101282792002 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243841517452 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290484882332 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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