In modern society people argue that schools become unnecessary as children can study at home via the internet Do you agree or disagree

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...nology advancement in our todays society,people think children can learn school work wi...
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Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to school'
Suggestion: to school
...society,people think children can learn school work with the use of internet without a...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this generation' or 'these generations'?
Suggestion: this generation; these generations
...ined in essay discussion. Children of these generation need to attend proper school because it...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , a
...h themselves alone at home. For instance,a child tutored online will find it a bit...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
...d online will find it a bit challenging to make friends free In addition,allowing per...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t a bit challenging to make friends free In addition,allowing personal learning u...
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Line 4, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , allowing
...nging to make friends free In addition,allowing personal learning using internet makes ...
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Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to use'.
Suggestion: to use
... In addition,allowing personal learning using internet makes a child to spend mo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g personal learning using internet makes a child to spend most of his time stuffi...
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Suggestion:
...e his age are displayed and not children friendly thus exposing him to some socia...
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Line 6, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , giving
...net fraud or online dating. Furthermore,giving children the chance to study online wil...
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Line 6, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...sss academic performance of the children,as they dont have physical classmate they ...
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Line 6, column 135, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...mic performance of the children,as they dont have physical classmate they can comple...
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Line 6, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...te they can complete with in examination . So most parents will believe that their...
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Line 6, column 276, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... their children are smart intellectually . In conclusion ,I believe it is not advi...
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Line 6, column 292, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...are smart intellectually . In conclusion ,I believe it is not advisable for the so...
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Line 6, column 395, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...en to study using online classes because,it will not help to relate well with peopl...
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Line 6, column 443, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not help to relate well with people and it will exposed them to what is beyond t...
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Line 6, column 453, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'expose'
Suggestion: expose
...to relate well with people and it will exposed them to what is beyond their age group....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35344827586 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98111767715 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60775862069 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0358223664 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.25 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165690955972 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776604585851 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485041740294 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887531263109 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286090438327 0.056905535591 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.