The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and the present.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map reveals the renovation of Ryemouth’s village from 1995 to now.
Overall, it is clear that the northeast and southwest regions of the village have the most significant changes during the period shown. While other parts of this village have few adjustments.
In 1995, there was big farmland and a large forest park in the northwest of the village. But now, these two areas are replaced by a sporty region including golf and tennis courts. Moreover, in 1995, a lot of shops and a fish market were located on two sides of the road which is close to the sea in the southwest of the village of Ryemouth, and there was a fishing port nearby as well. Now, the shop's system is replaced by a range of restaurants and new apartments are constructed in the location that belonged to the fish market, and the fishing port is removed.
Looking to the west of the map, the housing region at the present time stays almost the same compared to the past, it just has a few changes in the arrangement. And in the southeast of the village of Ryemouth, a new car park is put up next to the hotel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ficant changes during the period shown. While other parts of this village have few ad...
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Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'shops'' or 'shop's'?
Suggestion: shops'; shop's
...a fishing port nearby as well. Now, the shops system is replaced by a range of restau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48756218905 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49067466972 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547263681592 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2999884978 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131657270967 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574764951575 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525457706153 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961952566087 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548955019728 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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