The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The map given is describing the planning construction of the new supermarket in the Garlsdon town through two suitable locations. Overall, it is immediately apparent that there are a huge number of residents in that town which consisted of more than 60.000 people. Also, there are two sites which have been considered as the appropriate places for the supermarket such as the country side and the town center.
To elucidate it more, it can be seen that the Crasdon population is clearly the biggest one which counted by approximately 29.000 as well as it can be classified as the farthest location to reach the supermarket out of 25 km. whilst, the Hindon citizens is definitely the closest one by amount 12 km to access either the first or the second market. Both of those locations, however, have the railways which have been connecting each edge of places to market.
Furthermore, it is also important to take account that the Brandon citizens have been noted more that the Hindon community of 5000 different. Therefore, the access is quite far for about one of four the Crandsdon location. Somehow, the connection of Bransdon is reachable by solely passing the main roads.
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- The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9648241206 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76298754051 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592964824121 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3680597368 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.777777778 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187842393393 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782082494576 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10563585721 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128283905556 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132647785802 0.0819641961636 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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