Map : the changes of various facilities in the city between 2007 and 2010.
The map elucidates several alterations around the city hospital amenities from 2007 to 2010. At first glance, it is evident that the most noticeable changes occurred for the shape of the road around the city hospital.
To begin with the facilities around hospital, there was a new bus station which replaced the place of the bus stop in 2007 in the southwest of the city hospital. Furthermore, in the southeast part of the hospital, the car park of the staff was established to change the position of car park of the staff and public, and the bus stop in previous time, and the car park for public had been constructed in the east part of the city hospital.
In accordance with the alterations of the road in the city, there were two roundabouts in which it connected to each other via hospital road. The first roundabout was built in the southeast of the new bus station in which the second roundabout had been developed in the northwest of the new car park for the staff. In contrast, the city hospital remained unchanged over the entire period.
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- 'The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main change' 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, second, so, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5857923579 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456989247312 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5440774518 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17042812298 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905683613009 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878336037583 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131158924084 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096387501421 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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