The maps below show the changes that have taken place in the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the alterations which have taken place in Templeton, a seaside resort, from 1990 through to 2005. At first glance, it is evident that there were major changes in the number of new facilities in the town.
To begin with, in transportation aspects, Templeton, over the following 15 years, has built a new airport, which was constructed in the north of the town in between school and river, and a new ferry port, that have been built in the southeast of Templeton, particularly, in the south of railway station. Furthermore, the most noticeable change was occurred for a new railway line, which was developed in the east part of the town, running alongside the beach and crossed the bridge. Therefore, it connects to the west part of the town.
Moreover, 2005 witnessed a significant alteration for the business sector in Templeton. It is able to be seen that a new factory, which stand in the southeast of Templeton behind a new railway line, and supermarket, which was constructed in the southwest of the town and running alongside a new road, have been built in 2005. In addition to more changes, residential building also has been altered where it is capable of being seen that a new apartment blocks were constructed in between a new road and a new railway line.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81531531532 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80939918931 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504504504505 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.947668585 43.030603864 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.625 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 5.23603664747 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143788985664 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806090972173 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101725368994 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13427172842 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933126995197 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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