The given pictorial data represents the current situation of town centre called Islip and plan for its further development.
Looking at the present things, main road located in the middle of map with shops on its either sides accessible to the school and park on the southern part. Northern area is dominated by the counrtyside.
Analysing the structured and projected plan for future development, the major change will the establishment of the circular dual carriageway on the boundries the town. The main road will no longer exist as it will converted to the pedestrians. However, one side shops will as it is, northern side shops will be transformed in to the shopping center with the parking facilities and bus stand on right and left respectively. Another parking is planned at the south-east corner of highway. A new housings are estimated to buit in the north-east corner and near the existing residential area splited by the new main road on the south side of town. School will be planned to unchange.
Overall, the town will become more reliable by having a ring-road with upgrading few things and additng various modern emenities.
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 61
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The graph below shows the changes in the place where people used to surf the internet in the years 1998 2000 2002 and 2004 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and makes comparisons where relevant 84
- The chart below show the number of working hoirs per week in industrial sector in four European countries in 2002 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant 11
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'convert'
Suggestion: convert
...in road will no longer exist as it will converted to the pedestrians. However, one side s...
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Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'housing'?
Suggestion: housing
...the south-east corner of highway. A new housings are estimated to buit in the north-east...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02105263158 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78527986628 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7066070646 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140428058153 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597970227892 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645555293651 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102050446943 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796337211457 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.