the maps below show the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of the town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
This report will refer to two maps that show how a town named Darwin changed over five years between 2009 and 2014.
Overall, it is obvious that Darwin witnessed dramatic developments from industrial to residential. Furthermore, there was also renovated with the addition of a harbor and more pedestrian walkways.
In 2009, regarding the area encircled by the footpaths, the former industrial area was converted into a swimming pool. The school and the convention center located in the vicinity of this area and the northern main road remained unchanged. the industrial area is opposite the lake and the school inside the footpath is only grass but 5 years later the whole area has been weeded and built a swimming pool here. If in 2009 in the east there are 2 pools, by 2004 the number has been increased to 3 in the north and east area. Going to the southwest will see an additional harbor, and this is probably the biggest change and the most important construction of this area.
Perhaps the south is the part that has changed the most over the past five years. The first is that the industrial area in 2009 was replaced by a clean area with many trees planted along the footpath of the newly opened pedestrian path to help people move to the harbor. More residential buildings are also being built and on the east side, next to residential buildings is a newly built university. All to meet the needs of the people of the area to improve the quality of life and the travel and entertainment needs of everyone.
- The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and present Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 61
- the maps below show the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of the town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant 56
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve 73
- the maps below show the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of the town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant 56
- the maps below show the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of the town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... northern main road remained unchanged. the industrial area is opposite the lake an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 267.0 196.424390244 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75280898876 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54816003336 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52808988764 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0746166498 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169016848523 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609023359477 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066609998726 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11551891638 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925615191371 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.