You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Weight-related issues have been on the rise in certain countries resulting in fitness levels moving towards a downward trail. This essay will discuss some of the reasons why these problems have arisen and some of the steps that people can taking to address them.
For several reasons, the average body weight of people in several countries is rising these days and they have problems with their physical condition as well. Firstly, the variety of food is different in each country which could increase people’s weight, and the fitness standard reduces drastically. For instance, many Western countries’ people used to have foods in such as pizza and burgers, which leads to obesity and surge in their weight. Moreover, people used to skip their breakfast to keep fit because of which their weight gets increased after some point in time. Secondly, the prolific increase in the number of fast-food restaurants. For example, McDonald’s, Pizza Hut, and KFC. The advertisement of these restaurants focused on children to track their attention, thus, increasing the number of customers among children. However, not only this but hard-working people do also not have time to prepare healthy food at home, instead, they buy processed food such as sausages and meatballs in the closest stores. In addition, the lack of exercise is one of the reasons for human weight control. Most people are lazy to do any daily exercises that affect their health directly. For example, people intend to use the bus or train to travel for even small distances and people are using lifts instead of steps for small distance to walk their work premises as well. As a result, the human average weight is increasing drastically nowadays in many countries.
The measures for this problem have been and will continue to be taken. Individuals need to put more concerned about their own health. On TV, famous people need to talk more about obesity as a major problem around the world that lead to serious health consequences such as diabetes. Everyone should take a balanced diet, lead a healthy life, do some exercises daily and take advice from physicians. Not only this but great development was also introduced to the market, which helps to measure how many steps a person does during a day. The government can take many initiatives like adding more sports facilities in the community; strictly controlling junk food outlets and encouraging people to walk or use bicycles on the roads.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to average weight increase in people in many countries to maintain their health standards at a high level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...downward trail. This essay will discuss some of the reasons why these problems have arisen ...
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Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...sons why these problems have arisen and some of the steps that people can taking to address...
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Line 3, column 1238, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'traveling', 'travelling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: traveling; travelling
..., people intend to use the bus or train to travel for even small distances and people are...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2233.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 439.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08656036446 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60413585467 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5284738041 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9853614074 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9047619048 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29363379532 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924020869094 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619132393609 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201642007123 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473750459196 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...downward trail. This essay will discuss some of the reasons why these problems have arisen ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...sons why these problems have arisen and some of the steps that people can taking to address...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1238, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'traveling', 'travelling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: traveling; travelling
..., people intend to use the bus or train to travel for even small distances and people are...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2233.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 439.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08656036446 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60413585467 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5284738041 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9853614074 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9047619048 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29363379532 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924020869094 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619132393609 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201642007123 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473750459196 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.