The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pictures illustrate how a waterfront area of Darwin town had developed over a 5-year period
Overall, this place had undergone many significant shifts with the most noticeable one being the removal of the area for industrial activities. Also, the construction of a brand new harbor was also a significant alteration for the local people’s income
Looking at the map in 2009, the industrial area occupied the majority of this location. A part of this industrial site together with a lake was encircled by a footpath which was bordered by the convenient center to the north, a school to the northwest, and a couple of houses to the south. Also, there were two swimming pools constructed adjacent to the coast and a fishing area in the northeast corner of the map
By 2014, all of the industrial areas had been flattened and planted with many new trees. To the east of the map was an addition of a university building and a few accommodations were erected parallel to the old ones. The industrial area in the north which had been surrounded by a circled footpath had also been demolished to make way for a new swimming pool. While there was a brand new harbour constructed to the southeast of the area and a footpath erected from the west to provide access to this harbor, there was no transformation witnessed in the lake, the school, the swimming pools and the fishing area
- The pictures describe an island named Paradise island in the past and in the present 89
- Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports while others think people should have freedom to do any sports and activity Discuss both view and give your opinion 61
- The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2030 73
- The bar chart below shows the number of visitors to four London museums Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e northeast corner of the map By 2014, all of the industrial areas had been flattened and...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74273858921 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81494827955 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489626556017 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.8485705713 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.285714286 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4285714286 22.9334400587 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11202669666 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560042970501 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368442810057 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805949878314 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034876017141 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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