The maps below show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005
The map illustrate the developement of Youngsville in new Zealand throughout the period between 1980 and 2005. As can be seen, a significant amount of green spaces were cut down to make room for others facilities.
The most noticable changes is that all of the trees in the South of Alana river have been replaced by factories and warehouses. furthermore, to the right corner, rows of houses and green area was demolished and substituted by skyscraper and storing places. A new extension of railroad was built running straight north.
To the north of Youngsville, residential area near the river were turned into stadium and parking spaces.Only a small number of trees were still remained to the north of the river.The woodland were cleared to make way for the park. Likewise, a lot more activities were organized on the lake to the north of the map.
Overall, the area was significantly transformed over 25 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The map illustrate the developement of Youngsville in new ...
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Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s. The most noticable changes is that all of the trees in the South of Alana river have ...
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Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...n replaced by factories and warehouses. furthermore, to the right corner, rows of houses an...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Only
... turned into stadium and parking spaces.Only a small number of trees were still rema...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...ed into stadium and parking spaces.Only a small number of trees were still remained to the north ...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...till remained to the north of the river.The woodland were cleared to make way for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, likewise, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98701298701 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87743678219 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8428952755 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142580944827 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737913612197 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11421098842 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925601456101 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743379843709 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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