The maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it.
The picture illustrates a number of proposed changes that are to take place in the town of Hunderstone.
Looking at the painting, it is immediately obvious that while the area to the east of the railway will remain almost the same, the western side is going to undergo several significant changes, especially with regards to the transport infrastructure.
As can be seen from the first map, Hunderstone town is currently divided into two main sections by a railway line, which runs from south to north and passes by a gas station. To the west of the railway, there is an airfield which is combined with the main street (A2). A roundabout in the middle of this path connects the A2 way to the east of the area, and in particular, to the ring road around the town centre.
In the future, the airfield locating in the north-west of Hunderstone Town is expected to be replaced by an industrial estate and that is linked with the railway by the street will be created on the left of the industrial zone. A bigger circle will be constructed midway along the road connecting the east and the west of the town. A new route (A4) is planned to build in the south of the map. On the other hand, people maybe go to the town centre either by A2 or by A4.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so, while, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4192139738 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58702575846 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532751091703 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4993924341 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.444444444 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164370734621 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673155411533 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420121970466 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938233851501 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380079016085 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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