The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the current layout of islip town center and proposed plans for its development.
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currently, islip has a modest town center with a central main road running through it. The town features a mix of residential and commercial buildings. A park lies to the south, with a road leading to it from the main area. There are also small shops, a few houses, and a car park near the center. A few green spaces are scattered around the town.
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The development plans suggest significant changes. The central road is set to be expanded, with additional lanes to accommodate increased traffic. A new shopping center is planned for the northern side of the town center, replacing some of the houses. residential areas are also to be redeveloped, with new housing complexes being constructed closer to the town center. The park will be enlarged and modernized, with recreational facilities added. Additionally, the car park will be relocated and expanded to cater to more visitors.
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In summary, the development plans for islip focus on expanding commercial areas, modernizing public spaces, and enhancing residential accommodation, which will alter the current layout of the town.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 965.302439024 238% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 300.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.66333333333 4.92477711251 156% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.19875525139 2.65546596893 233% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 283.868780488 209% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.45097560976 138% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 212.108267542 43.030603864 493% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.846153846 112.824112599 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.063923852936 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500110293556 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586055823275 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083259859921 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792198850539 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 13.2329268293 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.29 61.2550243902 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.3012195122 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 27.44 11.4140731707 240% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 40.7170731707 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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