The maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it

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The maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it

The map depicts the changes of Hunderstone town in the future.
Overall, the most noticeable change is that the Roundabout will be erected in the center of the map. In addition, the Industrial estate will be constructed to replace the Air field.
At present, Air field is erected in the north-west corner of the map and it will be demolished to leave room for the Industrial estate and the new path will be built from there to the Railway. In addition, a newly-built Roundabout will be established in the center of the plan to make a connection to the Town center and A2 road.
In the proposed plan, the gas station will be kept the same in terms of position and size. Furthermore, a new A4 road will be built to connect the Town center and the southern region and this road also create a boundary under the gas station. Moreover, A new street will be erected on the right side of the map to establish communication between the town and the external residence.

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, moreover, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54022988506 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67759354653 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488505747126 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3322141718 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182632256633 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943162943781 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698750072061 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137334971199 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762192595329 0.0819641961636 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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