The maps below show recent cahnges in the town of kimsville.

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The maps below show recent cahnges in the town of kimsville.

The map illustrate the new developments and adjustment in the town Kimsville . Overall , there are two maps comparing before and after the development of the town.

Firstly there is a map showing the town in 2002 before the constructions of the facilities.

Secondly , Kimsville today has been renovated so much that it could not be easily recognized.
There have been built just 3 new buildings which they are: new apartments, a new train station and new a football stadium , also there have been some replacements of the old building with a software company and pub. The things which have not been replaced or renovate are the shopping centre and the city centre .However , because of these new adjustments the nature environment was affected and the half of the nature of city was cut down.

In summary , There were a significant changes in the town , although it is with its half nature environment now it is bigger and with more facilities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The map illustrate the new developments and adjustment in ...
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Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...nts and adjustment in the town Kimsville . Overall , there are two maps comparing ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...justment in the town Kimsville . Overall , there are two maps comparing before and...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tructions of the facilities. Secondly , Kimsville today has been renovated so m...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ated so much that it could not be easily recognized. There have been built just ...
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Line 6, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...train station and new a football stadium , also there have been some replacements ...
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Line 6, column 311, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... the shopping centre and the city centre .However , because of these new adjustmen...
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Line 6, column 313, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...he shopping centre and the city centre .However , because of these new adjustments the ...
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Line 6, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...ping centre and the city centre .However , because of these new adjustments the na...
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Line 6, column 426, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ected and the half of the nature of city was cut down. In summary , There were...
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Line 8, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ure of city was cut down. In summary , There were a significant changes in the...
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Line 8, column 39, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
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Suggestion: ,
...e were a significant changes in the town , although it is with its half nature en...
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Line 8, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...hanges in the town , although it is with its half nature environment now it is bi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94375 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80124342982 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8169071903 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123089889357 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892815426706 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950475731848 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100128982564 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106053050425 0.0819641961636 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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