The given pictures illustrate the developments which have taken place in an area of Kimsville from the year 2002 and today.
Overall, what stands out from the maps is that the town has become less green and experienced an extensive industrialization over the time period.
It is apparent from the more recent map is that the trees to the north-west and south-west of the city centre has been cut down and replaced by new apartments and a football stadium respectively. Another interesting change is that factory has been demolished to make way for a software company.
A further noticeable feature is that this town of Kimsville has witnessed the convertion of an old cinema into a pub. Another development is the construction of a new train station to the west of the town. Interestinly, the shopping centre and the trees in the North-east and south-east quarter of the area has remained until recently.
- In some societies it is increasingly common to try to achieve good health and fitness through physically demanding sports special diets or preventative medicine conventional or alternative Some people however believe that the best way to stay fit and heal 73
- the maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 87
- In some societies it is increasingly common to try to achieve good health and fitness through physically demanding sports special diets or preventative medicine conventional or alternative Some people however believe that the best way to stay fit and heal 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98692810458 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99708659993 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.821720036 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 5.23603664747 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129928397338 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555589541083 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332419342841 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680870271376 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228446042173 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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