The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The maps illustrate how a science park has transformed over time.
Overall, significant changes have occurred, resulting in a more developed and modern science park.
In the initial map, the science park consisted of a few scattered buildings across a vast area. The main feature was a central building surrounded by a parking lot. Additionally, there were smaller buildings located to the east, and some green spaces surrounding the structures.
In contrast, in the present-day map, several developments have taken place. The central building, which is situated at the heart of the park, has been expanded and now includes additional facilities such as laboratories and research centers. Moreover, new interconnected buildings have been constructed around the central structure, forming a complex network.
Strikingly, only minimal green spaces remain in the current version of the park. Instead, various roads and pathways have been added to enhance accessibility throughout the science park. These paths effectively connect all the buildings, facilitating easy navigation within the area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73619631902 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04139828107 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680981595092 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9324223177 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190865887309 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767229613117 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599761014378 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112942281048 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365363250042 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.42 11.4140731707 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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