The given maps sheds light on the various changes which has happened to Felixstone Town since 1967.
The Felixstone Town map of 1967 there is a High street which goes towards the north of the town, on its left of there is a row of shops followed by a huge farmland and on the right of the High street again there is a row of shops followed by a Golf course. On the south side of the town is the sea and just before it is a Marina, a Boat can also be seen docked at the Pier which is connected to the Marina. On the East side of the town just opposite to the Farmland there is a Fish market. There is a Hotel on the central region of the town and beside it is a Cafe, on the west of the town we see few Dunes and on the extreme west we see trees.
In 2001 map the area in the south and east parts of the town covered by Marina, Pier and Fish market have been reconstructed and split between two different beaches, Private and Public beach. There has been a Car Park added to the Hotel, but the Cafe has remained same. On the south-west there are few Wind Turbines constructed by replacing some of the Dunes. The Farmland which was on the extreme right of the High street has been replaced by a Hotel which has a Swimming Pool and two Tennis courts. One of the shopping areas located beside the High street have been demolished and Apartments have been constructed in that area. The Golf course remains in the same location on the North-west of the map.
- The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992 67
- The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions in Edinburgh Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 51
- The diagram below shows the water cycle which is the continuous movement of water on above and below the surface of the Earth 61
- The maps show changes to Felixstone Town Write a report to a university professor 67
- The maps show changes to Felixstone Town Write a report to a university professor 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... Wind Turbines constructed by replacing some of the Dunes. The Farmland which was on the ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 283.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1519434629 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18303074741 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448763250883 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5313301328 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.818181818 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152053256702 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617194062097 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688049087491 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143394998156 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796270998501 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.09 11.4140731707 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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