The diagram gives us an overview of the process cycle of water, which is a continued movement from the different surfaces of Earth.
Few of the important components of this water cycle are sun, ocean and ground, also there are majorly three steps involved like Surface runoff, evaporation and finally precipitation.
To start off, snow from mountain top gets melted which causes the water to flow by surface runoff, this water flow is further increased by the groundwater. This water flows through the impervious layer of the Earth's crust and then the process of salt water intrusion takes place. Further more this water then, flows into the ocean where the next step of this cycle occurs.
In the daytime due to the hot and scorching sun above the ocean body the process of evaporation takes place. After evaporation the water gets converted to water vapour. In fact our oceans contribute to around 80 percent of the total water vapour in the air. This water vapour formed is further forms the clouds using a process called condensation. Then these clouds due to wind travels to various nearby places and many a times they rain on the surface of earth, into lakes or forests. The process through which clouds rain is called precipitation. This water which falls back to earth surface again contributes to the water cycle as ground water. In this way the water cycle continues again and again.
- The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions in Edinburgh Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The diagram below shows the water cycle which is the continuous movement of water on above and below the surface of the Earth 61
- The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992 67
- The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the process of evaporation takes place. After evaporation the water gets converted to...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 421, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...avels to various nearby places and many a times they rain on the surface of earth, into...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, then, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89495798319 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3915536766 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.980244206 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6153846154 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374708258548 0.215688989381 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159462992171 0.103423049105 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115357979391 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262059505922 0.15604864568 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10292532655 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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