The maps show changes to Felixstone Town. Write a report to a university professor.
The maps illustrate the developments made to a town called Felixstone over a period of 34 years, from 1967 to 2001.
Overall, it is apparent that the town underwent drastic changes with the addition of a car park, tennis courts, apartments, and beaches had been separated into private and public.
To begin with, in 1967, there were shops on either side of the high street. There was some farmland to the east of the high street and a golf course on its west. In addition, there were dunes in the southwest corner, also a hotel near to it. Next to it was a hotel. The town is bordered by sea in the south and had a pier to access the sea and a fish market above it.
By 2001, the town had experienced some alterations. The shops to the left of the high street remained there while the shops on the right of it had been replaced by apartments. The farmland was demolished to give way to a swimming pool, tennis courts, and a hotel. Moreover, the old hotel near the dunes was renovated and a huge car park added to it. Wind turbines had been established in the southern part of the town. In addition, the marina and fish market had gone, a beach was developed there and its easternmost part had been converted into a private beach. However, the golf course and cafe remain untouched.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44725738397 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43455893611 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497890295359 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7143516077 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2857142857 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0837126978599 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302236117112 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464160398158 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732793512138 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531311889202 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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