The layouts illustrate the proposed innovations for an office building.
Overall, it can be seen that the office building will be dramatically enlarged, with the two grass areas being cut down to make way for upgraded facilities with an outdoor seating area, a coffee machine, meeting areas, and a set of chairs. Additionally, changes are planned for both the front and back of the building.
Moving to the exterior of the building, the left side grass area is planned to be knocked down to give way to an outdoor seating area, a coffee machine, meeting spaces, and a set of furniture at the bottom. Meanwhile, an extra coffee machine, an upgraded meeting area, and a set of seating at the bottom right of the building will be constructed to replace the right-side lawn.
Looking inside the building, two new offices will be built by demolishing the kitchen and canteen currently located at the rear of the building. The storeroom next to these rooms will remain in place, while the adjacent WCs will be relocated to the top-right corner of the building. The small four offices at the front of the building currently to the left of the entrance will be renovated into two big offices, one on either side of it.
- Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010 73
- The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each category from 5 organizations Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The charts below show the percentage of people working in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960 2010 73
- The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76303317536 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6070055747 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507109004739 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7494186015 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.625 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0886868475461 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485444883782 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028907491532 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680653283495 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215697933573 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.