More and more city workers are deciding to live in the country and travel into work every day. The result is increased traffic congestion and damage to the environment.
What measures do you think could be taken to encourage people not to travel such long distances into work?
There are more and more people moving out from big cities to suburban areas to live. This is causing may problems from traffic to environment because most of the jobs now are available in the big cities, so people have to travel back into the cities every day to work. To tackle this problem, there are some remedies.
To begin with, the government should reduce the gap between the countryside and city by constructing and relocating factories and administration offices to the rural areas to create jobs for people. They will still live in the suburban areas with their suitable jobs and only have to travel short distances to work. Besides, technologically speaking, thanks to the development of technology, there are more opportunities for people to work online at home. So, there are no reasons why companies could not let their workers work at home, perhaps two days per week and then go into work in the rest of the week.
A very different way to deal with the problem is encouraging people to stay in cities by improving the quality of life there. For example, the government should spend more money to reduce crime and society evils as those are the primary reasons why people do not want to live in the cities. Furthermore, as well as the environment can be made cleaner and agreeable to live with more green trees and fewer skyscrapers. In these ways, people might be encouraged to stay rather than moving out.
In conclusion, there are many ways to overcome the situation in both the countryside and city points of view. The government, as well as all of society's components, should join hands to find the best solution for this issues.
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 78
- The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in differnt countries in 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisos where relevant. 67
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 84
- The maps below show the changes that take place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. 56
- All children should study a foreign language, starting in the earliest grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement ? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...oin hands to find the best solution for this issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, may, so, still, then, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 284.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78521126761 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63924599474 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 106.607317073 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566901408451 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8028622219 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 5.23603664747 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260926830235 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834661157567 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574693619303 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141998586598 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757735908102 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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