the most preferred amongst teenagers in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and predictions for 2027

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the most preferred amongst teenagers in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and predictions for 2027.

The charts graph illustrated the most preferred amongst teenagers in Vietnam and Indonesia in 2017 and predictions for 2027.

Overall, in Vietnam, the most preferred restaurants amongst teenagers was Burger King in 2017, whereas in Indonesia the most preferred restaurants amongst teenagers was Mc Donald’s. In Vietnam, the same range is expected to become the largest group by 2027. In Vietnam and Indonesia, Mc Donald’s is forecast to become the largest group by 2027.

In 2017, approximately more than half of the teenagers in Vietnam preferred Burger King, but in Indonesia constituted slightly less than half teenagers in Indonesia and nearly one- eights. Mc Donald’s in the former country witnessed 43.1%, whereas that of the latter country accounted for 60.8%. However, the teenagers preferred KFC was relatively low In Vietnam and Indonesia, and it was expected that 4.1% in Vietnam and 23.8% in Indonesia.
By 2027, in Vietnam, Burger King is projected to decrease to 39%, whereas Mc Donald’s is expected to increase to 57.4% and KFC moderately increases to 6.3%. As for Indonesia, Burger King is minimally decreased from 15.5% to 12.3%. KFC will climb 15.4%, while McDonald’s reduces from 60.8% to 48.5%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, whereas, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36082474227 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85261662647 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463917525773 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2638417157 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.559121494441 0.215688989381 259% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.234531693541 0.103423049105 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.223759555804 0.0843802449381 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.4223633615 0.15604864568 271% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.247758782211 0.0819641961636 302% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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