Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
Today, the electronic device is an essential part of everyone life. There are many types of the electronic device but, television is one of the important electronic devices from last decades. Television is essential in everyone family. In a further paragraph, we will discuss television advantages and disadvantages in everyone life.
Firstly, from last decade television is the main source of media and entertainment for the people. Before, that newspaper was the main source. Now, day television helps people to get news and be aware. Television helps to get news regarding politics economic and climate change. It helps to spread awareness in public. It helps in entertainment medium and helps in learning for a child. For example, Tata Sky had some channels which increase children knowledge. It exemplifies, that television helps to spread news and knowledge in people and provide awareness.
The second reason, television helps in spread awareness among people. But, there are disadvantages also the access use of television will affect the eyes by which they have to wear specs in little age. Access to television diverts your mind from the main purpose. It exemplifies, that everyone has to see television in a limit.
In conclusion, television is an essential part of life to everyone. It helps to spread news and awareness. But, there is more advantage of television than a disadvantage. Thus, it is an important part of everyone life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...media and entertainment for the people. Before, that newspaper was the main source. No...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26180257511 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95190998973 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480686695279 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 8.94146341463 224% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7221208301 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.3 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.65 22.9334400587 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.65 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172533562961 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691791377728 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628448904525 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120624770604 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063351892632 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.04 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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