People Participate in IELTS Program in 6 English Courses in Pare, 2016

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People Participate in IELTS Program in 6 English Courses in Pare, 2016

class="MsoNormal">The table shows information about the class="number">number of class="student">student attending class="ielst">ielst program in six different courses in class="pare">pare in 2015. In general, it is evident that class="ge">ge and class="es">es are the most class="popular">popular place to learn ielts, while class="webster">webster and class="warung">warung class="ielst">ielst are class="two">two bottoms up on the class="list">list.

class="MsoNormal">Regarding the ielts Reading and listening parts, class="ge">ge (175 and 165) and class="es">es (170 and 158) had the class="highest">highest class="number">number of class participant, in contrast, class="warung">warung class="ielst">ielst (155 and 144) and class="webster">webster (155 and 145) were less class="popular">popular class="ielst">ielst courses in class="pare">pare.

class="MsoNormal">However, on the writing task 1 section, class="es">es ranked first on the class="list">list with 157 pupils followed by class="ge">ge with 155 students. Subsequently, class="warung">warung class="ielst">ielst and class="webster">webster on class="two">two bottom order.

class="MsoNormal">Standing in contrast, class="webster">webster and class="warung">warung class="ielst">ielst had the class="highest">highest class="number">number of the class participant on the writing task 2 section with 147, 146 each. Contrary, Test, class="ge">ge, and class="es">es are three less class="popular">popular course in this section.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Class
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Message: The proper name in singular (es) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...s;>ge and class='es'>es are the most class='popular'>p...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Class
... the class='list'>list. class='MsoNormal'>Regarding the ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Class
...s in class='pare'>pare. class='MsoNormal'>However, on th...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Class
...'two'>two bottom order. class='MsoNormal'>Standing in co...
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Line 7, column 290, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'section' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sections'.
Suggestion: sections
...class participant on the writing task 2 section with 147, 146 each. Contrary, Test, cla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, so, while, in contrast, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 965.302439024 193% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 11.65 4.92477711251 237% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 12.540708712 2.65546596893 472% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 283.868780488 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.8 1.45097560976 193% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 121.79826077 43.030603864 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.285714286 112.824112599 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0166684072438 0.215688989381 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0145862354483 0.103423049105 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0160390105269 0.0843802449381 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0139168905239 0.15604864568 9% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00819949508959 0.0819641961636 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.9 13.2329268293 339% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -52.37 61.2550243902 -85% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.51609756098 262% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.0 10.3012195122 252% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 50.59 11.4140731707 443% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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