The bar graph illustrates how different aged men and women in Australia did regular sports in 2010. Overall, the proportion of females who did regular physical activity in different age group except between 15 to 24 is much higher than male’s, the percentage of men and women doing exercise fluctuated according to their age group..
Looking at the detail, the age group (15 to 25) represent the maximum level of the males’ proportion(52.8%). As people grew older, this figure dropped considerably for the next age group(25 to 34) to 42.2% and dropped again for the age group(35 to44), to reach 39.5%. While in the age group between 45 to 54, this decreasing trend stopped at 39.5%. After a slightly increasing, there are 45% of men between 55 to 64 did regular physical activity and 46% for aged over 65.
Compared with males’, the percentage of women is much stable. the age group(15 to 24) had the lowest proportion(47.7%), and it grew to 48.9% at the age group(25 to 39). The proportion of women doing exercise stable in 53% at the age group(35 to 44), the age group(45 to 54) and the age group(55 to 64). Finally, it reached 47.1% for women older than 65.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 336, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... fluctuated according to their age group.. Looking at the detail, the age group ...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...the percentage of women is much stable. the age group15 to 24 had the lowest propor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6862745098 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76176662003 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53431372549 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9623858518 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220274167881 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097598773982 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099523656826 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176937037058 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117456999419 0.0819641961636 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.