The picture below give the information about Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground.
The given picture illustrates the information about Eiffel Tower and project plan to develop new amenities below the foundation of tower in Paris.
Overall, it is clear that the tower is expected to have five floors, having different departments. It can be seen that there will be two sight seeing elevated platforms on tower.
To begin with, the Eiffel Tower is 324 m in height and weight of the metal structure is 10,100 tonnes. In the upper ground structure, two platforms are constructed which are 37 and 115 m respectively. There are 1,665 steps that can be climbed to reach the two viewing platforms.
Probing further, in future developments, there would be five floors under the ground. On the first level it is projected to be a ticket office and access to tower and will also have a atrium with glass ceilling. Shops and restaurants will be incorporated on second floor. On the third level there will be recreational facilities such as cinema and music. The parking space would be on last two floors. All floors would be connected to lifts on the either side of underground area.
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...pper ground structure, two platforms are constructed which are 37 and 115 m respe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, third, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84042553191 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6703822952 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1580399792 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8333333333 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155412409305 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548255281485 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097858345969 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128736871738 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135184032099 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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